I choose to do the essay I did because I recently had a problem of my own in regards to my subject. I wrote this with the audience of a regular person reading this essay. The issue I am talking about is a common issue and affects many different people all over the world and I believe this essay can relate to every one of them.
The layout of my project I tried to keep simple and easy to follow. I had three very clear topics and I believe they were easy to follow. If someone only wanted to read about the contacts it was very easy for them to simply click on that link and find all the information they needed.
My podcast was personal story and why I decided to do this topic. I did not want to dwell on and on in the podcast about me but the fact that we need to listen to the instructions that are given to us because they are there for a reason.
My power point was mostly helpful tips on how to protect your eyes. I also added some visual aspects to it just to reiterate my point of why we need to follow these instructions given to us. I hope nobodies eyes ever look like the ones in my Pictures.
I enjoyed doing this project because I got to see the many different ways you can injure your eyes and I also learned more about what I did to my own eye and I know I will never do that again!
If I had more time I would develop my sections deeper. I have more information that I could have added into my essay I just did not have the time to do it. I would also organize it so it was in a clearer format.
My sources were all scholarly and taken from credible magazines or journals. I would use a larger variety of sources if I could have found them.
1 comment:
I'm glad you have learned a great deal about this topic. Considering you have had a personal experience with it. I positively know what and what not to do with contacts now. Even though I don't wear them.
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